date: Tue, 4 Jul 2000 10:24:01 +0700 from: "Sukachev Forest Institute" subject: from Prof.Vaganov to: "Briffa Keith" Dear Keith Draft of paper : Briffa K.R. et al. I have no significant remarks over this rich of statistical analysis and complicated paper. Only one short note to page 7-8 where in first paragraph telling about weaker TRW climatic signal. There are some earlier publications (for example, Hughes et al, 1999) where the highest correlation (0,84) between TRW and temperature is shown. The weakness, probably, related to heterogeneity of sites (northern timberline and more southern) for large sectors you used and shifting the highest response to earlier summer (spring) month towards to south. TRW is highly correlated (R=0,97-99) to tracheid production, and in high latitudes the most of tracheids are produced by cambial zone in first part of a season, so mainly response to the starting date of beginning of a season (Vaganov, Shashkin, 2000). Towards to the south, the starting dates are shifting to early date - it is obvious. Draft of paper: Briffa et al. (sorry, too many formal statistics for me). Only some minor notes could be made. 1. Third paragraph in part 2 (page 5). Concerning Fig.3. - what is the differences between thin and dashed smoothed lines in individual curves (one is age, another is?). Maybe indicate it in text rather in figure captions. 2. Last paragraph in part 3. You may mentioned the similar results about warm 15-th and coolest late 17-th centuries which are shown in temperature reconstruction based on supra-long Taymir chronology (Naurzbaev, Vaganov, 2000). 3. Last paragraph in part 4. The main similar cycles were revealed in analysis of Taymir two-millennia chronology (ibid). There are some relevant references (only ours): 1. Vaganov E.A., Shiyatov S.G., Mazepa V.S. Dendroclimatic Study in Ural-Siberian Subarctic. Novosibirsk, Nauka, 1996, - 246 pp. (in Russ.). Annual maps of June-July temperature anomalies over Siberian Subarctic were constructed based on 61 local tree-ring chronologies. There is an increasing of frequency of warm summers for the whole Siberian Subarctic in 20-th century. 2. Vaganov E.A., Shiyatov S.G., Hantemirov R.M., Naurzbaev M.M. Summer temperature variations in high latitudes of Northern Hemisphere during last 1,5 millennia: a comparison analysis of tree-ring and ice core data. Doklady AN, 1998, 338(5): 681-684 (in Russ. and Engl.). Coincidence of long-term summer temperature changes in different regions of Siberian Subarctic during last 1,5 thousand years is shown. These changes agree well with Greenland's ice core data. 3. Vaganov E.A., Hughes M.K. Tree rings and global carbon cycle. Problems of Ecological Monitoring and Ecosystem Modelling, 2000, 17: 36-48 (in Engl.). A review of application of various tree-ring data (width, density, fire scars, isotopic ratio etc.) to evaluate of certain parameters of carbon cycle in forest ecosystems. 4. Naurzbaev M.M., Vaganov E.A. Variations of early summer and annual temperature in the East Taymir and Putoran over last two millennia inferred from tree-rings. J.Geophy.Res., 2000, 105(6): 7317-7327 (in Engl.). Reconstructed temperature variations agree well with other indirect proxy data and reveal that warmth of Medieval Warm Period is closely to warmth in last century. Some cyclic components are significantly exist in temperature variations: double secular (around 180 years), secular (78-90 years) and intrasecular (44, 28, 11 and 6,7-6,9 years). Long coolest periods were in the end of 13 century and in 16-17 centuries. 5. Vaganov E.A., Briffa K.R., Naurzbaev M.M., Schweingruber F.H., Shiyatov S.G., Shishov V.V. Long-term temperature changes in Arctic region. Doklady AN, 2000, (accepted) (in Russ. and Engl.). Similarity of long-term summer temperature changes in high latitudes of Northern America and Asia over last 600 years, and significant correlation of its variations to volcanic sulfur components (negative) and solar irradiation (positive). Some disagreement between two large sector of Arctic region revealed for cool period in 19-th century: in Asian sector cool period occur earlier than in North America and Greenland. 6. Vaganov E.A., Shashkin A.V. Tree-ring Growth and Structure in Conifers. Novosibirsk, Nauka, 2000, - 238 pp. (will be published in September) (in Russ.). Thanks, Gene.