date: Wed Jun 4 16:15:50 2008 from: Phil Jones subject: Re: we arrived in MOHC to: Qingxiang, Here's some comments on the paper. I stopped half way through. I need to read the analysis section more carefully and I don't have more time today. I will look later. In the mean time here is where I have got to. I need to understand your logic at times. I think I understand why you are using the NCEP data from 1979. The text still comes over as though you are suggesting that UHIs and land use and land cover changes account for most of the changes. I don't think this is the case, so you need to clearer at the beginning what your main conclusions are. Cheers Phil At 18:25 02/06/2008, you wrote: Dear Phil, Thank you for the good news from AGU. We find some difficulties to use internet here in Exeter. so we are checking emails in the Central library in Exeter. Yes, we spent about 8 hours in London, and visted British Meseum, Bakinham Palace and Oxford street, and bought something for the family people, and then got the train to the respective destinations. Our journey seemed pretty good. I nearly finished the urbanization paper (draft) during these days, I will send to you, I have inclded you as a coauthor, Please tell me about your thoughts. We need to go now. cheers Qingxiang Prof. Phil Jones Climatic Research Unit Telephone +44 (0) 1603 592090 School of Environmental Sciences Fax +44 (0) 1603 507784 University of East Anglia Norwich Email p.jones@uea.ac.uk NR4 7TJ UK ----------------------------------------------------------------------------