cc: t.osborn@uea.ac.uk date: Fri, 30 Jun 2006 14:12:24 -0600 from: Jonathan Overpeck subject: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] Post-LA4 - the next steps to: wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu Hi Chap 6 Friends - the sun is starting to set on the fjord and the TS/SPM mtg is over. Thanks again for all your time and effort at the LA4, and also for agreeing to prepare the next draft of the report quickly, so we have enough time to ensure a polished final draft that fits TSU expectations. The next step includes: 1. Checking the attached executive summary bullets. Please note that we can no longer change the meaning of the bullets (except in extraordinary circumstances perhaps - since we reached consensus on those in the attached). However, if you see glaring problems with the way the meaning is communicated, please let us know. Otherwise, please write your assigned section text to support the bullets. Note that some bullets have been changed somewhat to support (and be in) the SPM, or to help clarify the meaning we agreed upon, but no meaning has been changed. 2. Please follow Valerie's lead and quickly circulate your edited sections, figures, tables and references to the LA team (plus relevant CAs), so that you can get us your review responses, finished revised text, figures, tables and references to us by **** July 17th ****. Please follow these guidelines: a. Send the text in a file which only contains your sub-chapter. b. Mark sections which have been changed with yellow. c. Mark sections which have been deleted with a strikethrough d. Write new references in at the bottom of the text using IPCC format. e. List deleted references below with a strikethrough ----------------------------- - Øyvind will work on the references now and check the list provided from the TSU. - We have agreed to not use EndNote for the rest of the work. The ref. list is almost complete anyway, and we will just add the new ones, delete those that will be taken out. - Please DO NOT use track changes or ENDNOTE (hooray!). 3. If you have any comments for the following sections, pls send to us for consideration during redrafting next week: 6.1, 6.2 (excepting 6.2.2) and 6.7. 4. Please send an email as soon as you can with your travel and vacation dates, and the extent to which we can expect to reach you while on these travel and vacation dates. Thanks. If you have any questions, please let us know. Thanks again, Peck and Eystein PS - paleo was strengthened and expanded somewhat in the SPM, but for now, no new figures do to space restrictions. There is an expectation that we might have to insert new figs (e.g., EPICA and the millennia NH temp recon figure) upon request at the Plenary in Feburary, but we'll worry about that later. -- Jonathan T. Overpeck Director, Institute for the Study of Planet Earth Professor, Department of Geosciences Professor, Department of Atmospheric Sciences Mail and Fedex Address: Institute for the Study of Planet Earth 715 N. Park Ave. 2nd Floor University of Arizona Tucson, AZ 85721 direct tel: +1 520 622-9065 fax: +1 520 792-8795 http://www.geo.arizona.edu/ http://www.ispe.arizona.edu/ Attachment Converted: "c:\eudora\attach\Chapter 6ExecSumBulletsLFinalV1.doc" _______________________________________________ Wg1-ar4-ch06 mailing list Wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu http://lists.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-ch06